changes to the story;

after watching clips throughout the filming on the iMacs we suddenly realised our storyline may not be percieved in the way we intended it to be as the relationship between the two characters may not be as clear as we thought. We did however want to keep the audience in suspense so as to watch the whole video, we believed this would be very effective to make the audience uncertain as opposed to a large conclusion that could be very confusing.
Therefore we made changes, to make our story clearer we have decided to show more past tense clips of the couple together.
Due to the fact we already had some scenes filmed outside in the park we decided to continue with this.
The couple is holding hand etc, but then the camera turns round a tree to show you the couple but the boy is alone. We will then show flashbacks of a text saying 'im sorry its over'. This then flows for the later scenes where the boy is seen asa 'stalker' over his ex, and the girl seems to be going insane.